A nice flowing opening scene with many Match on actions to make the journey interesting – so well crafted editing here. The taking off of the coat is particularly clever over two shots – a very creative use of Match on action. Perhaps too close to Dani in the office, she perhaps goes too much out of frame on the one shot, but still very good shot.
The only aspect of your film that could be improved is the Shot/reverse shot in the office environment. A few shots here are less well framed and your subject is swimming a bit in the surrounding. You do demonstrate shot/reverse shot, its simply a matter of the framing and composition – there is too much surrounding or on some shots half the screen is filled with irrelevancies – perhaps think about moving subjects a little closer together.
A nice flowing opening scene with many Match on actions to make the journey interesting – so well crafted editing here. The taking off of the coat is particularly clever over two shots – a very creative use of Match on action. Perhaps too close to Dani in the office, she perhaps goes too much out of frame on the one shot, but still very good shot.
ReplyDeleteThe only aspect of your film that could be improved is the Shot/reverse shot in the office environment. A few shots here are less well framed and your subject is swimming a bit in the surrounding. You do demonstrate shot/reverse shot, its simply a matter of the framing and composition – there is too much surrounding or on some shots half the screen is filled with irrelevancies – perhaps think about moving subjects a little closer together.